I want to you editing the paper based on feedback in file attached
you have to make it good than before
and there a big problem of citation you have to fix it
you have to you APA citation you can read the feedback and read the heading lines and the red line
you have to do more research and write a good hard data
I will give a time to write it so please make good and follow all the requirement.
if you need any thing just let me know thank you.