Revise research paper, English homework help

APA 1. correct grammar 2. sentence 3.paragraph __logical 4.look the relevant evidence in the research evidence to revise the evidence in paper—(help me to revise the paraphrase and summary) 5. correct the ciation to make it more persuasive 6.revise the topic sentence( cannot repeat words in the thesis statement) 7. give a restatement in the end (if you can help to revise better, I will review your comments and revise again, then I will also ask you help me to revise it again! Please help me!) Thank you very much!!