juvenile justice, law homework help

Elizabeth – all is good with your paper except one item – you have about 60% of supportive research – this needs to be taken down – for instance, you should be at about an 80% original analysis to 20% supportive content – a full paragraph should not be a quoted/copied material item – please take down the researched items and bring in more original (your) analysis and insight. Please correct and re-submit.
Instructor Brown

I am attaching the paper I have already written. Need another set of eyes to take a look at this, and fix it to what the instructor is looking for. I’m having a difficuly time with it.